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--Cant Think of a Title-- by ~BRoKEN-on-the-INSiDE:iconBRoKEN-on-the-INSiDE:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Fixed


Hurt me, harm me, cut me deep
My best friend til the end of time
Confuse me, abuse me, leave me be
I've become close to the end of my line

My heart breaks every time
I look into your eyes
You're the only one who sees past
My immaculate disguise

Hold me closely to your chest
Promise me you wont let go
Heartbeat to heartbeat, skin on skin,
I love you more than you'll ever know

Leave me on my own once more
To cause myself more pain
My heart, it feels so empty
I'm hurting for you, again
©2006-2009 ~BRoKEN-on-the-INSiDE
:iconbroken-on-the-inside:

Author's Comments

Hey Look Its That Thing From My Thing! (Translation: The poem which was written into a story I posted.)

Why am I posting it seperately? I do not know. But frankly, who cares?! :D

Damn... I need a title... (Think, Erin, think!!!)

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~MostAnnoyingKidEv0r May 30, 2006, 4:11:11 AM
That actually nearly made me cry! Its... Its... Its Emo, But Its Freaking awesome!

CJ Luffs This Poem.
CJ Luffs this poem enough to fave it.
CJ will fave this poem.

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*Hillbilly Gangsta* Fo Shizzle Mah Cotton bearin' pardner.

She walks through the corn leading down to the river
Her hair shone like gold in the hot mornin' sun
:iconbroken-on-the-inside:
~BRoKEN-on-the-INSiDE May 30, 2006, 4:41:35 AM
haha thanks :heart: :hug:

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Drain The Blood,
The Heart Is Wise...

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~Common-Individual May 30, 2006, 8:36:48 AM
Haha God.. This is so me. Its quite scary. I get all Sera-like every time i read this.

Its really good! :heart:
:iconbroken-on-the-inside:
~BRoKEN-on-the-INSiDE May 30, 2006, 8:59:33 AM
thanks honey

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Drain The Blood,
The Heart Is Wise...

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</3

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~love-over-hate May 31, 2006, 2:56:17 AM
this is really good

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don't hate for no reason love for all reasons
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~anti-social-freak May 31, 2006, 6:01:19 PM
hehe kool is that actually about someone or is it just something you wrote cause it popped in to ya head? luvs ya mwah xox luv insane andie 101
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~BRoKEN-on-the-INSiDE May 31, 2006, 6:11:47 PM
Nah this is to go with the first chapter of a story i wrote not long ago... Yeah... hmm...

Luv ya too hehe... Insane Andie 101... Niice.

Cock ya later! =P

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Drain The Blood,
The Heart Is Wise...

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</3

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~anti-social-freak May 31, 2006, 6:14:02 PM
oh yeah go for gold hehe (laughs a weirdo kind of laugh (like i do))
:iconbroken-on-the-inside:
~BRoKEN-on-the-INSiDE May 31, 2006, 6:20:20 PM
Hehehe.. you wouldnt be Andie if you didnt laugh like a weirdo.. so its okay ^_^

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Drain The Blood,
The Heart Is Wise...

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